WordPress.com Forums » Topic: What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style? http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/what-do-you-think-about-my-blog-should-i-change-my-style WordPress.com Forums » Topic: What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style? en Mon, 20 May 2013 12:38:38 +0000 http://bbpress.org/?v=1.1-alpha-2539 baconmouth on "What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style?" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/what-do-you-think-about-my-blog-should-i-change-my-style#post-618333 Fri, 03 Jun 2011 21:25:46 +0000 baconmouth 618333@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ Thank you very much Plastic! I shall improve my writing.

]]> plasticdaffodils on "What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style?" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/what-do-you-think-about-my-blog-should-i-change-my-style#post-618247 Fri, 03 Jun 2011 19:38:42 +0000 plasticdaffodils 618247@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ I agree that you use the word "retarded" too much. There are a lot of other words you can use that won't potentially alienate/offend part of your audience.

I also think you need to remember that you're writing for an audience, so remember not to use vague pronouns. For example, on the Rhianna post you said, "Apparently this video is the most horrible video ever made according to these people." Who are "these people?" Is there a specific group? Commenters on a post?

Anyone can say something is "stupid," it's when you explain *why* you think something is stupid that it becomes interesting. Keep working on it!

]]> baconmouth on "What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style?" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/what-do-you-think-about-my-blog-should-i-change-my-style#post-618213 Fri, 03 Jun 2011 19:11:08 +0000 baconmouth 618213@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ Thank you for your honesty.
I honestly don't know what my intent is. Maybe just to vent out.

]]> ginzotech on "What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style?" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/what-do-you-think-about-my-blog-should-i-change-my-style#post-617977 Fri, 03 Jun 2011 13:06:46 +0000 ginzotech 617977@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ Depends on what your intent is. If your intent is to use profanity and demean the disabled by using terms like "retarded" you are succeeding. I can tell you that after reading a couple of your posts, I realized it was not for me, but that is just me I guess...

http://ginzotalk.wordpress.com

]]> momfog on "What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style?" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/what-do-you-think-about-my-blog-should-i-change-my-style#post-617879 Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:59:56 +0000 momfog 617879@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ As you have katagelasticism, I don't see how you can help yourself. I'm sure you have an audience out there.

BTW, your blog is linked to your username. No worries.

]]> baconmouth on "What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style?" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/what-do-you-think-about-my-blog-should-i-change-my-style#post-617876 Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:55:33 +0000 baconmouth 617876@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ Errr, I forgot to add the blog url.
I'm sorry, ;P

http://baconmouth.wordpress.com/

]]> baconmouth on "What do you think about my blog? Should I change my style?" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/what-do-you-think-about-my-blog-should-i-change-my-style#post-617871 Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:43:45 +0000 baconmouth 617871@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ Hello.
I have a blog about reviewing and the such.
I was wondering if anyone could check it out and tell me if I'm being too rough with it?
Should I change my style and write politely and the such?

Thank you very much! I appreciate it.

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