WordPress.com Forums » Topic: Would like feedback http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/would-like-feedback-1 WordPress.com Forums » Topic: Would like feedback en Wed, 19 Jun 2013 01:17:46 +0000 http://bbpress.org/?v=1.1-alpha-2539 dribblingpensioner on "Would like feedback" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/would-like-feedback-1#post-916255 Sat, 16 Jun 2012 16:31:51 +0000 dribblingpensioner 916255@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ Thanks rough seas, likewise to you :)

]]> roughseasinthemed on "Would like feedback" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/would-like-feedback-1#post-916028 Sat, 16 Jun 2012 08:01:08 +0000 roughseasinthemed 916028@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ good advice from DP

it looked quite interesting, just some of the pars are still too long, I don't think people realise what a switch-off it is.

the reason for writing an about page is that we are all lazy people so if you say what your blog is about, then it saves us having to engage our brains and work it out for ourselves.

]]> dribblingpensioner on "Would like feedback" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/would-like-feedback-1#post-915522 Fri, 15 Jun 2012 19:36:42 +0000 dribblingpensioner 915522@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ I have, don't right in a blog with text or msn type of writing, people will not be bothered reading or going back it a turn off, write with proper English writing.

Use full stops, comas, etc, break it up into smaller paragraphs.

Write an about page about you and your blog.

Delete hello world, and then come back and ask the same question when you have 3 / 4 posts done.

Sorry you asked for advice. :)

]]> heavensz on "Would like feedback" http://en.forums.wordpress.com/topic/would-like-feedback-1#post-915383 Fri, 15 Jun 2012 17:55:58 +0000 heavensz 915383@http://en.forums.wordpress.com/ Any suggestions

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