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aspiring novelist and stripper - your opinion?

  1. theminaproject
    Member

    Hey, I am a student and a lap dancer and this blog is a practice for my writing. I had first started it a year ago but stopped posting after a while due to unforeseen circumstances. I'm now trying to get back on track and would like some honest opinions on my writing style, and any improvements/encouragements you can give.

    http://theminaproject.wordpress.com

    Thank you, and I hope you like it :)

    The blog I need help with is theminaproject.wordpress.com.

  2. invisiblemikey
    Member

    Well, Mina, your writing style is adequate, but your choice of subjects isn't very imaginative. All you've presented is a number of posts about the downsides of lap dancing, and finding a pyramid of poo on your stairs. You probably care about other things in life. Why don't you try writing about them?

  3. ardpete
    Member

    I don't like man hates

  4. ardpete
    Member

    Though your blog intrigues me so ill keep reading.

  5. azncowboy587
    Member

    I just dont think he likes strippers... ahaha Prude! :)

    Anyways, I took a look-see and its very interesting! I don't know strippers personally and Ive only seen them in gentlemen clubs, working in their environment to scam men (uh-oh I let out a trade secret LOL). So its intriguing to me, to know the thoughts and feelings about one when they live in their natural daily lives.

    I'll give points for her personality and thoughts that she puts into her post. If shes planning on writing a book someday, I might actually buy it!

  6. plasticdaffodils
    Member

    I think your posts seem honest and genuine. Keep at it!

  7. theminaproject
    Member

    Thank you all for your opinions and constructive criticisms guys. It's good to have encouragement and advice. :)

  8. lafemmeroar
    Member

    I don't know whether to visit the blog of the original poster or the commenters. InteWesting personalities here :)

  9. atomicgator
    Member

    you had me at stripper. Here is a thought, just brainstorming here. Ease up on the writer and punch it up with pictures. Again, just a random thought ;-)

  10. lafemmeroar
    Member

    Don't listen to what atomicgator has to say. Keep up with the writing. Stay mysterious and let those interested in your looks use their imagination :) Or you can give subscribers a link to your pic ... that is one way to get tons of subs :)

  11. creeped
    Member

    "I'll look at yours if you look at mine."

    Couldn't resist. Great blog.

  12. theminaproject
    Member

    That is my picture on the side of the blog, I'll make a note underneath it to keep those happy.

    Anyways, back to the writing...?

  13. theminaproject
    Member

    Shameless self bump. How is everyone?

  14. ardpete
    Member

    I have some catching up to do, I shall check out more of your recent posts tomorrow :)

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