I agree that shortening paragraphs will make it easier to read. I often abandon reading something if I have to reread it multiple times.
In addition, I think that you need to get out of your head a bit. In reading the post, "Isolation," it's difficult to visualize what you are saying on first read. You obviously have a strong vocabulary, but sometimes, using smaller words and more concise thoughts are the best ways to get your point across.
Try reading out loud to figure out where you might be able to take out superfluous words or phrases. Such language works well in poetry but not always in prose.