"You must refrain from rewriting except to editorial order."
That's Robert A Heinlein's advice to new writers. It's also a guaranteed fire starter on any literary board.
I've put up my thoughts up and I hope to get some other POVs, especially with so many writers lurking around here! Yeah, I know you're here... I'm lurking in those dark corners too, you know.
The blog I need help with is cheapassfiction.com.