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Poem, snow flakes

  1. dribblingpensioner
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  2. Very nice and soothing. Using short, choppy verses is one of my personal favorite poetry styles. The only criticism I have of the poem is the "white...moonlight...bright" rhyming. I think the rhyming creates a break in the flow. That might be intentional, but I think that the mood set at the start of the poem was very calm and relaxing and that rhyme breaks some of that. But overall I thought it is a very good poem.

  3. dribblingpensioner
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    postic, thanks very much for your comment, I did not mean it to rhyme but thats how it turned out.

    You might enjoy the rest of my poems, all short and no rhyming, no sense either :)

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